In class we were asked to show to our fellow peers the rough cut of our music video to get feedback. We received both positive comments and constructive criticisms. The postive comments we recieved were; our use of different shots were good as it made it more interesting, especially the shot where we used the effects of mirror image. The costumes worn by our made character was said to be really well thought about and went well with the music video. The location we decided to film in (a park to resemble a forest) was said to be really nice and went well with the tone of the song as well as the use of the piano. This also made it look more realistic and can be seen as a music video. There was a part where we had our main character kick the stool of the piano, which was said to a bit cheesy but did reflect on our character's emotions (anger).
The constructive critisisms that we recieved were that we needed to improve the timing of the lip synching as it almost match the lyrics of the song but not perfectly. There was a scene where we had letters scattered on the floor, however they thought this could have been improved if we made it fall onto the floor somehow. We also need to add in the missing shots that we hadn't got around to editing in yet. The bedroom scenes were said to be a bit too dark and therefore needs to be brighten which we can do when editing. Also, there is a part where the door was closed and then suddenly opened, therefore, we need to make sure we edit it to make it run smoothly.
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