Evaluation Question 3

The feedback we recieved from our rough cut of our music video consisted of both positives comments and contructives criticisms. They liked the shots and angles used, especially the high angle shot used at the end of the video. The use of the high angle shot was to show her being depressed, down and weak as it reflects on the way she felt inside. Even though our main character plucks up the courage to leave which shows her strength, her emotions over powers this and her weakness overshowders her strength and so by using the high angle shot at the end we wanted to portray this. However, though they liked the shots and angles they also mentioned that there weren't many as the majority were medium shots.

But the reason to use a majority of medium shots (epecially in the middle of our music video) was also to reflect on how our main character feels inside. Mostly, when people break up from a relationship, at first they do not want to be seen and they choose to isolate themselves from the rest of the world (hence the establishing shot of the forest in the begginging which shows distance and also the loneliness she felt in their relationship) and once they are ready to open up to people they allow them to come up close and personal but still want them to respect their personal space (hence there being a lot of medium shots during the drama). Even though from our audience we learnt that they liked music videos that were more faster and did not consist of one shot which went on for a long amount of time, it is something that happens in our music video genre where a story is told. An example of this is: Avril Lavigne - I'm With You. Therefore, adding in more medium shots was something we acknowledged but did not take on board as it was done intentionally. The shot types were used to reflect on how our character feels at that specific time.

Another constructive criticism was that our shots were too long (shot 37 and 41) and reason for this was because in the shot we will have her running towards the camera whilst singing the lyrics. Even though our audience thought tthe shots were too long once they saw our music video they understood how it fitted in. It was used to show that she's been trying to get away from the relationship, hence why she is running for a while.

Furthermore, the feedback we received was mostly positive, but we did receive one negative comment which was the 'lip syncing was a bit off at times'. However, the positive feedback we received were: "had a good use of location at the start; scene where the park is deserted with tress works well with the music at the beginning. The piano is used to show how she is feeling and she turns to music to drown her sorrows. The leaves, the whole for setting shows isolation. What you normally see in relationships that are complicated and needs to improvement. The fact that she walks out, packs her bags shows she's is fed up as well as heartbroken. And towards the end she is quite strong and leaves. Plus it does not follow the stereotypes of woman, instead shows the woman being independent.' From this feedback we are able to see that our music video sends the correct message across to our audience.

One the other hand, the feedback we received from our magazine advert was also consisted of both constructed criticisms and positive comments. The positive comments were that the explanation behind it was a good one and reflect on our music video. However, the criticisms we received were that if 'the picture can not explain it for itself then it's not a very good one' and that it was 'simple'. Firstly, the reason for it to be simple is because it made the meaning behind it more simple. Secondly, even though the image itself may not make the meaning clear to our audience straight away, it is something that will stop and make our audience wonder why we have chosen it and what we mean by this.

This will then make then go and search it up even more. Having too much on a magazine advert could complex people and may make then turn over the page, but having a simple picture will make them wonder why they can't understand what the meaning is if the picture is so simple. Making them actually bothered to find out why it is so simple and what is meant by it. Also, having done research in our genre, it normally consists of a magazine advert which is simple and do not have a lot on it and so we decided to follow that.

Furthermore, the feedback we received from our digipak also were both positive comments and negative criticisms. The positive comments we received were that the 'back of the digipak made sense and looked  very interesting'. It was something they 'could see themselves looking at in a store'. They said the 'idea of the cracks in the heart made it come to life and made it more real'. It 'pointed out the feelings of our main actress in the music video'. Even though the background was black, they felt it 'went well with the explanation and the images in them made up for the background being black'.

The negative criticisms were that they thought the 'front cover needed more of a better explanation' and 'different colours needed to be used'. Once the front cover was explained to them again it was understood and then said to be 'a good idea' as it 'reflected on the message we were trying to put out and the music video'. However, the reason our digipak mainly consisted of black was to reflect on how our main actress felt in the music video. We did not leave it black as it was an easy thing to do but was done intentionally. However we did end up changing the front cover of the digipak and added a background.

My Representation

This represents me because my name Stephanie means 'Crown'.

Music Video Evaluation Q4

I used Google to find information on our chosen genre, Soft Rock. Through Google, i found several useful sites such as, Wikipedia and Yahoo Answers. From both these sites i was given a definition of what Soft Rock is and artists who are within that genre. I also found Google Images helpful as i was to find pictures of the artists i was not familiar with. 

I then went on to use Youtube to get a better understanding of Soft Rock music and to find out the conventions of Soft Rock. I watched several artists including Pink, Avril Lavigne, Good Charlotte and Maroon 5. From these i was able to come to the understanding that the conventions of Soft Rock vary and there isn't a certain theme followed. Finding this helped us to then decide on ideas for our music video. 

I used Survey Monkey to create a survey for my target audience about what they expected to see in a Soft Rock video. I used Facebook and Twitter to get my target audience to complete my survey. Finding out what they expected to see helped us to know what kept them interested in a Soft Rock video. However, we decided not to take everything they expected to see on board but to bring something new as it will make it more interesting if it is unexpected. 

I used Premier Pro to edit our music video by cutting out footage we didn't need or adding special effects or video transitions. An example of this is our black and white scene. I used Photoshop to make my digipak and magazine advertisement. This helped both our projects look skilled by the use of it's tools.

Music Video Evaluation Q2

How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts?

There are different aspects of our music video we included in our digipak and magazine advertisement to make them all reflect on each other. having done our research on digipaks and magazine advertisements in the soft rock genre, we found that they all vary and there isn't a certain straight forward convention that if followed. However, at times what is on the front cover of the digipak is normally the same on the magazine advertisement.This then gave us a choice in how we wanted our digipak and magazine advertisement to be and what aspects we wanted to use for them all to reflect on each other.

 

Music Video Evaluation Q1

Through our research on the conventions of a soft rock music video we found out that instead of there being a simple straighforward convention of what should be in a soft rock video, there is more of a variety of conventions you would expect to see. For example, you could have aspects of rock conventions such as an isolated place and aspects of pop conventions such bright clothing and colours. A music video example of this is: Pink - Funhouse. However, we also found out that the conventions followed could be based on the meaning of the song or the beat of the song. For example, In Avril Lavigne - Girlfriend music video, her song is about wanting to be someone's girlfriend who already has a girlfriend and therefore would expect the video to be dull and dark, however, the beat of the song is fun, fast and uptempo and so her music video reflects on the beat. However, In her When You're Gone music video, since the song is a depressing one which reflects on someone leaving, the video reflects this as it is very dull, dark and sad. Thus, having gotten this information from our research we understood the conventions of a soft rock video in the music industry.

Futhermore, we then decided to do more research on the conventions of a soft rock video. We wanted to see what our target audience thought were the conventions of a soft rock music video and what they would expect to see. We did this by making a questionnaire on surveymonkey.com and sending it out to our audience to then complete. This helped us understand what our audience expected to see in our video and therefore, we had the choice of either following these conventions or going against it. We decided to go with the conventions as well as challenge these conventions.

Frame 1.
Frame 1 is an example of how we conformed but also challenged the conventions of a soft rock video. The information we found out from our research showed us that normally soft rock songs about depressing stories with slow beats are normally dark and dull with dark costumes. Also our audience said they expected our video to be located in an isolated place or abandoned streets and dark and wild costumes. However, even though we took this on board by having the location in an isolated place and having dark and wild costumes, we also challenged these conventions. We challenged these conventions by having a colourful background instead of making out background dark and dull. By doing this, we thought that our audience will be more interested as it challenges what they would normally expect to see and gives them something different to watch.

Frame 2.
Frame 2 is an example of how we conformed to the conventions of a soft rock video. Our research showed us that in a soft rock music video they normally have an instrument or instruments. We decided to follow this convention as we believe it was an important aspect in a soft rock video as it reflects on the rock side of our video whilst the colourful background reflects on the pop side. An example of this can be seen here: Avril Lavigne - Innocence

Frame 3.
Frame 3 is an example of how we used a technique of mirror reflection. This was used to capture our main character in a different way as it helped the audience feel as if they are in the shoes of our main character and is looking at the reflection in the mirror feeling what she is feeling. It makes it more up-close and personal. It does not conform or challenge the conventions of a soft rock, however, it's intentions behind it is what conforms to the conventions.

Frame 4.
Frame 4 is another example of a technique we used where the intentions behind it conforms to the conventions of a soft rock video. We used the technique of black and white for our audience to understand that it is a flash back. This makes our audience see the different emotions our main character was going through in the past compared to the present.

Frame 5. 
Frame 5 is an example of how we conformed. In this scene our main character kicks the seat back and in many soft rock video this occurs or either a guitar being smashed. An example of things being kicked or thrown about can be seen in Pink - Funhouse music video. The use of this may reflect on the 'cheesy' side of soft rock video but it can also reflects on emotions as when a person is angry things are normally kicked and thrown about.

Frame 6.
Frame 6 is also an idea we added in which it's intentions conform to our genre. The use of showing the letter was to help our audience understand and see how our main character came to leave the person she loved. This makes our audience feel involved in the music video as they get to see every little detail.

Frame 7.
Frame 7 is an example of how we conformed to the conventions of our chosen genre through our main characters clothing. Soft rock music videos normally consist of the main character wearing clothing which reflects on the whole 'rock' scene and thus, the clothing our main character wears reflects on this. An example can be seen here: Rihanna - Rockstar 101

Frame 8.
Frame 8 is also another example of how the intentions behind it conforms to the conventions of a sock rock video, however, the technique itself is one that challenges it. The use of having half our main characters' face was to reflect on the lyrics being sang at the specific moment. These lyrics are; 'always incomplete' and thus, having half her face showed that she was in complete. This does not normally happen in many soft rock videos and so it brings something new to it.

Frame 9.
Frame 9 is an example of how we conformed to the conventions. The use of candles is an aspect you would expect to see in a soft rock video and thus, by having the colourful background which reflects on 'pop' we wanted to put in something that reflected on 'rock' hence the candles and by doing this helped our audience understand that it is a soft rock video. An example of this can be seen here: The Pretty Reckless - Just Tonight

Digipak Feedback

Today we were asked to show the draft of our digipak and we received both positive and negative comments. The positives were that; our front cover image subverted the meanings of colours as we had the dove in black and the artist in white. The reason for this is because doves are normally associated with freedom and we wanted to change the meaning and have the dove in black and our artist in white to show that freedom is actually in our own hands. Also her being in white signifies peace. The image on the inside of the digipack (heart shaped mirror with pictures behind it) was also liked and was said to be a great idea as it was different and well thought about.

The use of the rose was said to have fitted the conventions of our music video. But we also received constructive criticisms; the meaning behind the image of the rose was not understandable as it was not clear and we did not have a specific reason for it. However the reason for the image was that; the rose symbolizes love, the locket symbolizes them together and when you love someone you incorporate in their life and merged together which is why the pendent was wrapped around the rose. Also we needed to think about the colour scheme on our front cover as the majority was just black and would mean that the dove and the title wouldn’t be seen. Therefore, we have decided to make the back a dark grey colour which happens gradually. The back cover was also not clear as the colours were bright and did not relate to the rest of the covers and so that too will also be dark grey. And the title was said to be a bit small and so we will make it bigger for it to stand out more.

Planning For Digipack.

The purpose of a digipak is for the use of a permium package for CD singles, special editions of CD albums, DVDs and DVD sets. Digipaks consist of a 'bookstyle' paperboard with one or more platics trays which are capable of holding a CD or DVD attached to the inside. A group known as IMPAC Group, Inc, were the original owners of the Digipak trademark.

This is an example of a four sided digipack

This is probably the most common, which includes a pocket with a booklet including lyrics, information and photographs.

This is an example of a six sided digipak

This consist of a front and back cover, a spine, photgraphs of the artist(s), artist(s) information, song lyrics and a disc pocket. The reason for a larger digipak is that it allows the comstumer to have an easier viewing of the contents.

Therefore, because of this we have decided to make a digipak which consists of 6 sides. This will allow our audience to get a better understanding of what our images are trying to portray. The images with have chosen to use are; three windows, one broken, the other half broken and finally one that's not broken. The will be on the inside of the digipak and the reason why we have chosen those images are because it reflects on our music video. Our music video is about our main actor looking back and remembering how it started and ended; how the cracks began and what is left of the relationship. The mirror plays a significant role in this as in the music video our main character sits by the mirror as she remembers the relationships and what she needs to do to get out of it.

For the outer part of our digipak we have decided to have our main character standing on a hill with her arms out open to a dove flying away. The reason for this is because a dove represents freedom and in our music video our main character leaves the life she has for freedom. We also have a rose with a chain around it. The colours we have decided to use are dark colours such as black; however, we have decided to leave the dove as white because we want our audience to understand that having freedom is a positive thing even if it means losing the one you love. Everyone has the right to freedom and shouldn't feel the need to depend on someone. The use of black not only signifies pain but also 'hidden' and 'naive' - meaning that in a relationship the most important feelings are normally hidden from one another and lies are told; naive because we chose to believe we are in the wrong when we know we aren't in relationships.

Here are examples of album covers from artists in our music video genre:

Avril Lavigne:

Good Charlotte:

 

Linkin Park:

From looking at these three covers we can see that when it comes to the album covers of the music genre soft rock there is a variety of where the artist goes (front or back) and whether the artist is shown or not. There is also the use of bright and dull colours which could be used to reflect on the fact that it is a soft rock album. There is also a variety in the type of fonts used on a soft rock album cover as we can see in the pictures above. Therefore, when making our album covers we will have a range of choices on what it should look like and how it can reflect on being a soft rock album.

Half Term Filming.

During the half term, me and my partner were supposed to go out filming however due to certain circumstances we were unable to do so. We had scheduled the days we were planning on filming, which locations to film in and what time as you can see on our breakdown sheets. Having spoken to our teacher about why we could not film over the half term, we were given more time to film and came up with a different alternative, which was to film each other instead of relying on our actors who also couldn't turn up. One of our scenes included a male character and since our actors also could not make it we had troubles finding a guy. However, we did decide to use other people to portray the flashback in the music video where their faces are not shown.

Feedback From My Movie Rough-Cuts

In class we were asked to show to our fellow peers the rough cut of our music video to get feedback. We received both positive comments and constructive criticisms. The postive comments we recieved were; our use of different shots were good as it made it more interesting, especially the shot where we used the effects of mirror image. The costumes worn by our made character was said to be really well thought about and went well with the music video. The location we decided to film in (a park to resemble a forest) was said to be really nice and went well with the tone of the song as well as the use of the piano. This also made it look more realistic and can be seen as a music video. There was a part where we had our main character kick the stool of the piano, which was said to a bit cheesy but did reflect on our character's emotions (anger).

The constructive critisisms that we recieved were that we needed to improve the timing of the lip synching as it almost match the lyrics of the song but not perfectly. There was a scene where we had letters scattered on the floor, however they thought this could have been improved if we made it fall onto the floor somehow. We also need to add in the missing shots that we hadn't got around to editing in yet. The bedroom scenes were said to be a bit too dark and therefore needs to be brighten which we can do when editing. Also, there is a part where the door was closed and then suddenly opened, therefore, we need to make sure we edit it to make it run smoothly.

Conventions of Our Music Video Genre.

The genre of our music video is Soft Rock. The conventions of a soft rock music video consists of either: black clothing, a dark background/lighting, dark make up and a isolated location or colourful clothing, bright background/lighting, natural makeup and a location where it is fun or it could include both of these concepts. Several soft rock artists who follow these conventions are Avril Lavign and Pink. Avril Lavigne's
'Hot' music video consists of coloured clothing, bright backgrounds and a fun surrounding. Whereas, her 'Innocence' music video consists of wearing dark clothing, black eyeliner and in an isolated place playing a piano. Another example, is Pink's 'So What' music video - this too consists of bright colours and a fun setting. However, a music video that consists of both conventional ideas is Avril Lavigne's 'The Best Damn Thing' music video. This music video has bright and coloured backgrounds, however her make up is dark and at some points so are her clothing.

In our music video we decided to follow the conventions of a soft rock music video. Our music video consists of a dark dull background/setting, an isolated location, dark makeup and dark clothing. We decided to make the lighting brighter than what you would expect in a dark soft rock music video as we also wanted it to have an aspect of a pop and so by making the video a bit more soft and gentle it makes it more soft rock than just rock. Even though we did not go against or challenge the conventions of a music video, we did go against what our target audience expected in a soft rock music video. For example, they expected to see a basement as a location, however we decided to use an isolated forest as our location. We believed that by making the music video something our target audience wouldn't expect would be more appealing and interesting to them as it will be something different.  

Breakdown sheets.

Anamatic Presentation Feedback

Today I was asked to show our animantic music video to our fellow classmates and asked for their opinions - both positives and contructives criticisms. They liked the shots and angles used, especially the high angle shot used at the end of the video. The use of the high angle shot was to show her being depressed, down and weak as it reflects on the way she felt inside. Even though our main character plucks up the courage to leave which shows her strength, her emotions over powers this and her weakness overshowders her strength and so by using the high angle shot at the end we wanted to portray this. However, though they liked the shots and angles they also mentioned that there weren't many as the majority were medium shots.

But the reason to use a majority of medium shots (epecially in the middle of our music video) was also to reflect on how our main character feels inside. Mostly, when people break up from a relationship, at first they do not want to be seen and they choose to isolate themselves from the rest of the world (hence the establishing shot of the forest in the begginging which shows distance and also the loneliness she felt in their relationship) and once they are ready to open up to people they allow them to come up close and personal but still want them to respect their personal space (hence there being a lot of medium shots during the drama).

The use of close ups, medium shots and wide shot when our main character is playing the piano also reflects on her emotions as she remembers the whole relationship. The close ups were used for our audience to see and understand what our main character is going through and also it reflects on our main character opening up and letting the people know that she is hurt. Wide shots and long shots were used to show the isolation, loneliness and segregation of her relationship and how she feels alone inside. There was a close up of half the face of our main character - this was to reflect on the lyrics 'this absolution is always incomplete'. This too reflects on her feeling that she is not complete without his love and that she is the only one in the relationship who still loves him whereas he doesn't love her anymore. Also a white flash was used to that scene 23 is a flashback.

Another constructive criticism was that our shots were too long (shot 37 and 41) and reason for this was because in the shot we will have her running towards the camera whilst singing the lyrics. Futhermore, some of my fellow classmates mentioned that they did not understand our music video, however, there was a student who understood it and decided to explain it to the rest of the class. Her understanding of the video was correct as she explained it was about a relationship failing and the girl in the relationship has had enough and decided to leave without her boyfriend knowing and the scence of her playing the piano is from a different time period. This explanation is correct. The scenes of her playing the piano is her remembering everything that happened (hense the drama playing out afterwards) and the scenes of her and her boyfriend in a house is to show the death of the relationship as it portrays death and seperation in the relationship and how she leaves him.

The scenes of her running towards the camera was a mirror image of her leaving the house, as she remembers leaving her house she begins to run away leaving also what is most precious behind her (the piano) and then we have her standing still and looking back in both scenes to show that she is reliving the amount. However, I do believe that the main reason why my fellow classmates did not understand was because our drawing techniques are not perfect and so we had a hard time drawing what we wanted our shots to look like.

Survey

In Media we made a survey about what people would like and expect to see in a 'Soft Rock' music video. We did this by signing up to http://www.surveymonkey.com/ and creating our very own 10 questioned survey. Since we could only do a 10 questioned survey (unless we upgraded) we decided not to include the questions, are you a 'male or female' or age group options. However, what we needed to find out was what our audience as a whole wanted and expected in a music video and whether they listened to soft rock or hard rock more. But we did make sure that we sent it only to people who are 16 plus and are both male and female. Our survey can be seen from here http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/M6LLRKW

From our findings we found out that people expected to see abandoned streets, dark and wild customes in a soft rock music video. They werent to keen on whether the actors looked their age however, did say they would expect to see both the actor and artist in the music video. Also, they preferred the music video to have a storyline and a hidden meaning. When asked about what they were more likely to watch and listen to they picked options that reflected on soft rock.

Therefore, taking this into account we can either take their opinion on how a soft rock video should look like or go the opposite way and change certain bits. If we decided to take their opinion on how it should look like it could be boring as it's what they would expect to see. However, if we decide to change certain things then it might keep them more interested in watching the video as it's something they do not expect to see.

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Target Audience Profile

What music they listen to?
They would most probably listen to rock, pop, heavy mental, indie when it comes down to favourite music genres. These genres would most be appealing to them because of the lyrics - it might relate to them in some kind of way or maybe simply the loud noises. Their favourite artist could be The Pretty Reckless, whose music is mostly about life challenges and emotions but also has loud instruments. For example, their song 'Just Tonight' could be seen as a girl who is in a bad relationship which can relate to many young teenage or even adults.
The Pretty Reckless - Just Tonight

What they do at weekends?
During the weekends when they have free leisure time, they like to play instruments, for example their guitars. They mostly do this for about 1 hour or more with friends at a friends house. Also, they like to go to a skate park and hang out with friends or skate board - learning new skills and showing off the old. And if there are bands playing at a local pub they are most likely to go and check out the music and hang out with friends as they enjoy a drink or two.

What breakfast cereal they would choose? 
Their favourite cereal is Crunchy Nuts.

What mode of transport?
If they arent in a hurry they will normally travel by skateboards and bicycles as it is their favourite form of transport. However, if they are needing to get somewhere on time they will take a bus or train.

Where/how they live? 
They live in the borough of Camden, Noth London in a 3 bedroom flat they share with their mum and younger sister. Both their bedrooms consist of black with a hint of white wall painting, posters of favourite artists and a single bed. She also has a dog named Maddie.

Their favourite drink?
Their favourite drink are WKD and Redbull.

Their favourite TV shows?
Their favourite TV shows are Jackass and Family Guy. They find the too shows extremely funny, really cool and exciting and believe everyone should watch it.

Their favourite vegetables? 
Their favourite vegetables to eat are spinach, sweetcorn and brussel sprouts since their mother always tells them it's good for them.

What sport they watch/play?
They don't watch a lot of sports but their favourite sport to watch is Tennis. They believe Rafael Nadal is an amazing tennis player. And they also like a bit of badminton.

Who would be their ideal partner? 
They have a huge crush on Synyster Gates. They think he's a brilliant guitar player and are a fan of his tattoos.

Where they go on holiday?
They do not go on holiday a lot unless it's to see family who live in Germany.

What resturants they go to? 
They aren't big fans of restaurants but the last restaurant they went to was TGI for a friends get together.

What political party they would vote for?

They are not interested in politics in the slightest.

Music Video Survey

For Media I have been asked to create a survery for my music video. My target group are those who are 16 and over. By doing this survery, it will help me to understand what my target group want and expect to see in a music video and will ensure that I satisfy your needs.
http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/M6LLRKW

Copyright

Johnathan Coulton a singer song writer based in Brooklyn refers to his music as an experiment in new ways in which content will be distrubuted and disseminated as a result of the internet. In his own words is that, ‘I give away music because I want to make music, and I can’t make music unless I make money, and I won’t make any money unless I get heard, and I won’t get heard unless I give away music.' Jonathan Coulton has all of his music available to stream to stream on his website, as well as many of the songs available for free download. Customers are then able to buy the song and can also make donations via paypal or amazon. Jonathan says that some of his songs have been downloaded hundreds of thousands of times, 45% of his income in 2007 was from paid digital downloads. He believes that most of his success is because he was able to give away free music and allowing his music to be used in music videos made by fans and posted on Youtube which some has recieved high views. Fans have also created cover versions of his songs, artwork, dances, plays, card games and even guitar instructional videos. This has enabled him to getting free publicity, Coulton believes.

This case study's argument is for music copyrights as it shows that giving music out for free helps spreads the word faster and gets the artist more noticed. It shows that by giving free money doesn't always results in poor outcomes instead more profit is made if music is given alway as it will ensure that his voice will be heard. Many may argue that this means artists could lose out in a lot of profit if music is given out for free, however this case study shows that making more profit can also be the case as it shows that his music has also been downloaded many times. Having given out his free music this has enabled fans to create music videos, cover versions, artworks and many more which has helped in getting his music out there more, ensuring a bigger audience.

I also agree with this method and think that it is a clever and better way of getting music out to fans. By having his music out there for free encourages more people to listen to it which gets him out there. It also helps as fans can then use his music to create music videos, cover versions and so on. Therefore, giving him a worldwide audience which then can lead to more profit as people from different places/county download his song. However, I do believe there is negative side to this. That being he could lose out on profit since he is giving his music out for free which might prevent people from buying it. But as proven by Coulton, free music could also be seen as positive.

Here is evidence of how worldwide he has gotten (the views) by giving out his music for free:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sxNmeMklFk8